voting of poem competition

by caliban_is_dead Sun Dec 21, 2008 7:59 am

heyaaaaa y'all
finally we will begin voting for the winner poem competition
okkey here the points

-please for all members in this forum give vote to select the winner

-for the participants please you vote for your own self

-voting over at december 25,2008 and we will select the winner according the result of voting

-good luck

by caliban_is_dead Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:08 am

title : untitle

fall and got up, stood at attention back for investigated the full of the barrier's life .

the heart was sliced by the tongue and was wounded .

let this heart be wounded and I was cried .

let this heart was groan and I was sad .

but let I loved, loved yourself was as intact and full of my heart

by: acm4ldinie

title : My Reality and my mask..

i woke up in a world where i was alone
feeling unvalued like an empty soul
i avoid everyone because i'd rather be alone
beside my wall
i remain in silence because it's the only thing i can do right
i dress in black so i can be invisable at night
i play my music so loud so no one can hear me cry
i make a sence so you will notice if i die
i cut my wrist so i know im not numb
i dont try because im afraid of the bad luck
i sleep in late because im afraid of the day
i dont talk because ive nothing to say
i dont give my trust because everyone just betrays me
i rebel because no one will let things be
i remain missunderstood because no one wants to understand me
i guess i dont need to be understood.
just let me stay with my own solitude
and ill be alright by hiding behind a mask.
you wont see my face.
looking at first glance
im in a happy place
but the truth is
that is a LIE
how can i be happy living this life,
while i know im going to die?
what is the point of being happy,
if in the end im going to cry?
i think this is something no one sees
this is something no one knows
and yet deep inside of me
the feeling of misery grows
so eventhough this mask reveals a happy side of me
i use the mask as a shield to look at what others can never see

by: dido101

by caliban_is_dead Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:24 am

title: ghost of my heart

You are like a ghost who lives in my heart
Ghost that my soul caresses and softens my feelings
A ghost that purifies love,
Host to that I do not ever let go

You are a white sweet pearl
A girl with honey lips
My world melts in them
I would like to see those beautiful black eyes
Where in rumbles the echo of the sea

I'm a slave of your dreams
Looking for signs in your constellation
Always thinking about you
Thinking in the sun shines
In a nook of the sky

I would like to show everything
That I’ve written to you
In the depth of the sea
But I feel fear at listening to your cold words
Fear to love that generate my broken tears

I understand that it’s no longer possible that you stay with me again
But already anything stops me
Cause I just live for you
Thereby that, without think,
Kiss me with your honey lips
And I will show you everything that I have written to you on the sun's cheek

by: csar

title: Myself and My Girlfriendâ€™s Attitudeâ€

If I praise her,
she thinks I am lying

if I donâ€™t,

I am good for nothing

If I agree to all her likes,
I am a wimp
if I donâ€™t,
I do not understand,
If I visit her often, she thinks I am boring
If I am donâ€™t,
she accuses I am double-crossing

If I well dressed,
she says I am a playboy
If I donâ€™t, I am a dull boy

If I jealous, she says I am bad
if I donâ€™t, she thinks I do not love her

If I attempt a romance, she says I didnâ€™t respect her
If I donâ€™t, she thinks I do not like her

If I am a minute late, she complains itâ€™s hard to wait
If she is late, she says thatâ€™s a girlâ€™s way

If I visit another woman, I am not putting in â€œquality timeâ€�
If she is visited by another man, â€œoh itâ€™s natural, we are girlsâ€�

If I kiss her once in a while, she professes I am cold
If I kiss her often, she yells that I am taking advantage (in Hindi she yells
that I m â€œthankâ€�)

If I fail to help her in crossing the
street, I have lack ethics
If I do, she thinks itâ€™s just one of my tactics for seduction

If I stare at another woman, she accuses I am flirting
If she is stared by other men, she says that they are just admiring

If I talk, she wants me to listen
If I listen, she wants me to talk

In short:
So simple, yet so complex
so weak, yet soâ€¦
So confusing, yetâ€¦
So damning, yetâ€¦.

â€“If Ur Not Expecting Anything In Life,
Then Ur Living
The Real LIFE!!!!!"

by: gj-great

title: unforgetable memory

Dead leaves are falling on ground,
sweet gentle breeze blows back around.

its not what i thought would be,
something strange feelings in me.

I gaze a while,again,again i see
heart found beating who is she!!

She passes long path glittering oh!
I think magic,walk alone her path through

questioned mind,do i love her?
Black eyes,long hairs chanted forever!!

I wanna say,something,something;
i'm lost,afraid of nothing.

She turns on me look for even one last,
i lost her,can't believe the past.

Often my tears fall,but mind never cries,
cause heart says me,true love never dies...................

By: net-trap

by caliban_is_dead Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:34 am

title: god is truly fair

when everything was so much out of the system
and the light had started to dim
held the treasure i had been keeping
it seemed like in no value

when i'm gone,
too far away
every direction would have led me to nowhere
it will be such a touch-and-go

i've been there where nothing was so much worth
saviour was a dream
aggrieved by this sick world
love was never there

i have been trying to deal with some of my pointless thoughts

but
now it dawns on me
that
God is truly fair
I see a plausible explanation for those ironic scenes in my past
I was blindfolded
I was just locked up

God is truly fair
never knew I'd be blessed to have this unexplainable feeling
I can tell the world
that now
Love is a colorful expression

and whole misery
gone
in a light of eternity

God is truly fair,

and I'm officially in heaven of happiness

by: green.-eyed-.fairy

title: remember that we have to die one day

my soul, listen to me
without you my body is mere clay

that crumbles and can be washed away

as I waste the seconds day by day

and celebrate the new year and my birthday

I pinch parts of you and throw them away

who will be the winner at the end of the day?

my soul, why do I treat you this way?

in front of my God what do I say?

that He gave me a gift and I threw it away?

Once upon a day
could be tomorrow could be today

when I run out of pinches to throw away

and I turn back into a lump of clay!!!

and I am rushed into the ground not far away

isn't this the soil I treaded on yesterday?

you see, oh my desires, am not here to stay!

what? now am in it, to be chewed away?

that's why I cant always follow all that you desire or say

Do business with God that's the successful way

Get rid of that attitude and mind what you say

Renounce idle talk and foul play

Mention His name at the start and end of day

Hold on to His rope, you won't regret it on the last day!

your life, oh my soul, is the very seconds ticking away!

who will be the winner at the end of the day??

By: deathismyshadow